Excellent piece - well done. Some great continuity examples - lots of MOA, you observe the 180 degree rule throughout and the small bit of S /RS work at the end works - however, this element is very short and you need to address that. I could nort upload from your blog so it is possible that i watched the incorrect version. It needed to be in the completed file - only 2 were. Do this at your peril fro the final exam as the completed folder is what is marked!!!!
You have gone to alot of trouble - for instance to film both inside and outside the car, the slow motion, the CCTV, the overlapping editing - this is all beyond expectation, so well done. you communicate your enthusiasm through such work and have set your self very high standards now for the final thriller opening.
If this is the correct version, you need to do a S/RS sequence and add at the end - imp.
Your blog to date - some post are really good. However, to many are visually boring - walls of text are not what is required - ex=very post must be multi media in format and interesting to look at. You can't get into level 4 without addressing this.
Some posts are absent - no storyboard for instance, no evidence of post production work - your editing and decisions you made. Your experimental shots like Slow motion needed an explanation as to how you achieved this very effective post. Overall low level 3 at present.
Excellent piece - well done.
ReplyDeleteSome great continuity examples - lots of MOA, you observe the 180 degree rule throughout and the small bit of S /RS work at the end works - however, this element is very short and you need to address that. I could nort upload from your blog so it is possible that i watched the incorrect version. It needed to be in the completed file - only 2 were. Do this at your peril fro the final exam as the completed folder is what is marked!!!!
You have gone to alot of trouble - for instance to film both inside and outside the car, the slow motion, the CCTV, the overlapping editing - this is all beyond expectation, so well done. you communicate your enthusiasm through such work and have set your self very high standards now for the final thriller opening.
If this is the correct version, you need to do a S/RS sequence and add at the end - imp.
Your blog to date - some post are really good. However, to many are visually boring - walls of text are not what is required - ex=very post must be multi media in format and interesting to look at. You can't get into level 4 without addressing this.
ReplyDeleteSome posts are absent - no storyboard for instance, no evidence of post production work - your editing and decisions you made. Your experimental shots like Slow motion needed an explanation as to how you achieved this very effective post.
Overall low level 3 at present.